I'm passionate about gymnastics because it makes me feel really flexible and I like the way I can bend into lots of positions that other people can't. I also like it because of how I feel when I do something scary and avoid hurting myself.
It makes me feel like I've accomplished something,and that I'm doing something that would look like you would need a stunt double in a movie. Like for instance. A backup circle, I learnt it in 4th grade but I still find it scary if I haven't done it for a while. It's being on the bar and doing a back flip without taking your hands off the bar.
I love doing it, and I love doing gymnastics.
If I had gymnastics taken away from me I would be so upset and I would probably do what I could to get it back. Even if I permanently injured one of my legs, i would probably just work and work until i got better and better at walking then I'd go back to gymnastics.That's my passion.
The cool part is... I can do what the images show!!! 
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You've reworked your writing, Caitlin, and the form is better. Still, I think it needs more thought in an organized manner. What is the introduction? What are your 3 examples and are they fully developed. What is your conclusion? I hope your next essay will show more of this form.
I thought it was good but needs to be more discriptive in ways. It was still a good piece though.
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